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Flash point

by joanie 

Posted: 14 May 2006
Word Count: 18
Summary: I'm tempted by Flash Poetry's challenge this week!
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Life treads water until
the young ones of love
touch like a child the
kindling

of its flame.







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Katy Kat at 19:43 on 14 May 2006  Report this post
Joannie

It's delightful! Love the break between
kindling
and
of it's flame
and also
Life treads water
Yes it does!
KR

Kate
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joanie at 19:50 on 14 May 2006  Report this post
Thanks, Kate. Hope you don't mind me gatecrashing 'Flash Poetry'!
joanie
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DJC at 20:01 on 14 May 2006  Report this post
Hi Joanie!
You're more than welcome in this group at any time. Why don't you join up? Your talents are gratefully received here.

D.
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joanie at 20:06 on 14 May 2006  Report this post
I'm already part of three groups! Four would be way too many, I suspect!

Thanks for your encouragement.

joanie
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Plagious at 15:05 on 15 May 2006  Report this post
Hi Joanie

Curious, so had to read. Not familiar with the style. Think I understand or comprehend, but will never know?

I responded as it struck me at a certain level. Hmmm? Perhaps this is good! P
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Beanie Baby at 19:24 on 15 May 2006  Report this post
Nice to see you here Joanie. Loved this. I think the gap between the final two lines is really effective.
Beanie
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joanie at 22:40 on 15 May 2006  Report this post
Plagious, I don't think I understand it fully either! Thanks for reading.

joanie
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joanie at 22:42 on 15 May 2006  Report this post
Thanks, Beanie. I appreciate it.

joanie
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