April haiku by joanie - WriteWords.org.uk

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April haiku

Posted: 27 April 2006
Word Count: 13
Summary: ...and it's almost May!

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Now Nature coaxes
green offspring into the light;
a late Spring this year

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Account Closed at 10:00 on 28 April 2006 Report this post

Very true, Joanie! - I love the simplicity in this and also the very strong last line. Great!

:))

A
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joanie at 12:46 on 28 April 2006 Report this post

Thanks, Anne!

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Beanie Baby at 20:00 on 01 May 2006 Report this post

Very effective; captures the mood brilliantly.
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joanie at 20:09 on 01 May 2006 Report this post

Thanks, Beanie! I appreciate your response.

joanie

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