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Glow of fortune

by DeadPoet 

Posted: 21 April 2006
Word Count: 43
Summary: This poet died some time ago - many of her poems are about relationships that did not work
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Lips touching in a glow of fortune
Silence following
A ream of the dream
Silence saying all and everything
Understand my love
Or I shall scream
I love you
For the world to hear;
Though I sense in the silence
You can hear






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Plagious at 15:17 on 15 May 2006  Report this post
Hi Vanessa

Was a little thrown by the title, but the line, "Silence saying all and everything", resonates well. As does,
"Understand my love
Or I shall scream
I love you".

Simple expression, but moving. Very good! P
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DeadPoet at 09:00 on 20 May 2006  Report this post
Thanks for looking at this P.
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