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Flash Poetry #7: Gifts

by Cailleachna 

Posted: 31 March 2006
Word Count: 50
Summary: I don't know about you, but I could do with a break from 'the X of Y go ZZZZZ'. How about a Countdown poem [only ten lines]?
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Sun up, sun down, she breathes - no sound greater
Sharp wind, wild storm, her choice; we can wait
Rain falls, ground drinks, long time coming
Light cover of snow, we sleep
Warm sun rising on us
She wakes us gently
We stretch and yawn
Today we
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paul53 [for I am he] at 06:45 on 01 April 2006  Report this post
I'll leave my comments in tomorrow morning's judgement.
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seanfarragher at 15:57 on 02 April 2006  Report this post
Fascinating and a very well done for a piece I thought about but didn't attempt. You deserve kudos. Do you use that word in the UK? I forget. I need to visit again soon. I want to explore the south of England near Devonshire where I know I have a few thousand cousins.

There is nothing more I can say about your poem. It is totally charming and visually works.
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