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Haiku - Inspiration

by eanna 

Posted: 28 February 2006
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grasp another
feint and whispering shadow
ideas not easy






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joanie at 12:11 on 28 February 2006  Report this post
eanna, you're dead right - ideas often aren't easy! It's a struggle to find inspiration sometimes (well, often, probably).

I enjoyed it.

joanie

typo: Did you mean 'faint'?
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Nik Perring at 15:43 on 28 February 2006  Report this post
Yup, I know what you mean. Well said.

Nik.
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Beanie Baby at 19:55 on 01 March 2006  Report this post
Isn't it funny how we get a spate of writer's block sometimes which onlyends when we write a poem like this! Very profound little piece.
Beanie.
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Account Closed at 10:52 on 10 March 2006  Report this post
Very true - and well expressed! I'd be tempted to put a semi-colon at the end of the second line though - just to add to the punch factor ...?

A
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Barlow at 16:53 on 18 March 2006  Report this post
Eanna,

This is a very effective piece packing so much meaning into so few words.

You have conveyed the elusiveness of ideas and the difficulty of capturing them, perfectly.

I tend to agree with HollyB that a semi colon would make for increased impact on the reader.

Look forward to more gems from you in the future.

Best wishes,
Barlow
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smudger at 11:41 on 11 April 2006  Report this post
Hi eanna,
Expresses the pain of writer's block so well. Excellent.
Tony
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