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Life and Death

by hailfabio

Posted: 26 February 2006
Word Count: 25
Summary: Mirror again

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Life -

I fight
myself everday. A fight
to the death.

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Death -

One day
I'll give up, we all give up,
one day.

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Beanie Baby at 19:52 on 01 March 2006 Report this post

This is SO sad, Stephen, yet at the same time, it is SO true. Words like these are what make me stop and think, re-assess and put things into perspective. I have been going through a really rough patch lately and I quite often find myself fighting myself! Never a cryer, I burst into tears last night and took myself completely by surprise! Trouble was once I started I couldn't stop and I can't remember the last time that happened. Anyway, it must have worked because I woke up feeling more positive this morning and reading your poem has helped me to get a grip.

But it is still sad!
Best wishes,
Beanie.

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eanna at 20:50 on 01 March 2006 Report this post

Hi

Your words look good on my metaphorical coin. Or is it allegorical.

Something ...cal anway.

E

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jewelsx at 21:26 on 06 March 2006 Report this post

An impressive 25 words, this is good.
Don't change anything
JX

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hailfabio at 19:15 on 21 March 2006 Report this post

Thanks,

They are quite sad but true.

Stephen

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