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Colours

by hailfabio 

Posted: 19 February 2006
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Two colours.
Gently fading.

Two colours.
Fading gently.

Two colours.
Fading into me.

Two colours.
Fading with me.

Two colours.
Fading.






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joanie at 20:56 on 19 February 2006  Report this post
Hi Stephen. I really like the mystery of this; I wanted to read 'fading into one' so that I could believe that it was about faling in love. I keep re-reading this.

joanie

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sorry - 'falling'
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hailfabio at 11:10 on 21 February 2006  Report this post
Thanks.

Yes I think this could have lots of meanings, falling in love definately. I get the feeling of time passing, maybe finding your way in life, forging relationships.

Interesting thought.

Stephen
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Beanie Baby at 20:11 on 21 February 2006  Report this post
so tender - like a whispered kiss. Very beautiful.
Beanie
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Jekyll&Hyde at 09:35 on 27 February 2006  Report this post
Hi hailfabio,

I like how this fits together. The contrast works well, and I think it works because you leave it to the reader to choose their own colours.

S.M.
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