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Beneath the blue

by joanie 

Posted: 24 January 2006
Word Count: 9
Summary: Sometimes they just take over!
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Yellow post-it notes;
daffodils waving under
stressful azure skies.






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Beanie Baby at 19:56 on 24 January 2006  Report this post
Oh how lovely! Joanie this is just beautiful - a real breath of fresh air.
11/10!!!
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joanie at 20:25 on 24 January 2006  Report this post
Thank you, Beanie! Praise indeed.

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Account Closed at 10:36 on 28 January 2006  Report this post
Ooh, yes - my desk is surrounded with these!! Post-its create yet more work - wonderfully true!

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joanie at 12:11 on 28 January 2006  Report this post
Thanks Anne. This just came when I realised I had just written the umpteenth of the day!

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Laura Hunt at 10:28 on 01 February 2006  Report this post
Love the idea, Joanie, and the first two lines. Something about the rhythm of the last line jarred a little though - don't know why.

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smudger at 11:05 on 01 February 2006  Report this post
Hi Joanie,

They multiply like daffodils, but with less attractive results. Drew a smile of recognition.

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joanie at 14:30 on 02 February 2006  Report this post
Laura and smudger, thanks for your thoughts.

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