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Morning

by hailfabio 

Posted: 24 January 2006
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Blue morning sigh,
we all ask the same whys.
Blue yawning sky.






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joanie at 17:57 on 24 January 2006  Report this post
Hello Stephen. Oh, I know! This makes me feel even worse than I normally do in the mornings! I would feel inclined to say 'why' rather than the plural, but that's my idea - your choice!

Perhaps All ask the same 'why?'

Nice one.

joanie
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Beanie Baby at 19:54 on 24 January 2006  Report this post
Like this, Stephen. It's a little bit like one I put on recently called S-T-R-E-T-C-H so we must be on the same wavelength sometimes! I love 'we all ask the same whys'. Soooo true! And we always will! Thank you for sharing.
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Laura Hunt at 10:25 on 01 February 2006  Report this post
Made me smile, albeit ruefully!
Thanks
Laura
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hailfabio at 10:45 on 01 February 2006  Report this post
How so Laura?

Thanks beanie and joanie.

Stephen
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smudger at 11:02 on 01 February 2006  Report this post
Hi Stephen,

This provoked some thoughts. If we all ask the same 'whys', (btw I agree that 'why' might work better) do we all reach the same conclusion?

Thanks for this.

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Laura Hunt at 08:38 on 02 February 2006  Report this post

How so Laura?


Why (!) do we yawn and sigh when we see, through the sleepiness of a new morning, a blue sky inviting us to be.

That's how so .....

Laura ;)
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