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Wiping the Mind Clean

by Dark One 

Posted: 31 July 2003
Word Count: 104
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Wiping the Mind Clean

He awoke as if being born and with each sleep he died
His perpetual life existed in the blink of an eye
In his world time stood still
Dust never gathered
Trees never aged
Polythene models where his mind was caged
Wood never splintered
Paint never cracked
Homes forever appearing reassuringly intact
A veil of black hid the world
Obscuring the thoughts from his prison cell
He was trapped in a paper bag
Suffocating from cellophane
His memory teasingly just out of reach
Fingertips clasping his sanity
These words echoing through his mental sieve
‘Remember to remember is to live’






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poemsgalore at 18:28 on 31 July 2003  Report this post
I can relate to this Tom,
"He was trapped in a paper bag
Suffocating from cellophane
His memory teasingly just out of reach
Fingertips clasping his sanity" sounds really scary, but also very real. A great poem.

Dark One at 08:29 on 01 August 2003  Report this post
Thank you poemsgalore

I wrote this poem fairly quickly but it was driven by an underlining fear of becoming senile and alzheimer's that I guess we all have to some degree. I am glad to like it

Take care
Dark One

poemsgalore at 18:19 on 01 August 2003  Report this post
I think most of us worry about this at some part, it's basically where my own poem "Insanity" came from.

Dark One at 09:00 on 02 August 2003  Report this post
Yes I agree it is a common fear and your insanity poem is brillant


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