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Rudens

by PhillC 

Posted: 21 October 2005
Word Count: 11
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Feelings wake in fertile hearts
Unexpected growth
October leaves fall lightly






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joanie at 16:13 on 21 October 2005  Report this post
Hi Phll, I love the feel of this haiku. I like the contrast of growth and the dying leaves; the first two lines sound like it should be Spring.

Good one.

joanie
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Laura Hunt at 18:57 on 22 October 2005  Report this post
Mmm. It has a great feeling of optimism.

'feelings wake in fertile hearts' - even in the autumn there is fertility and growth, for those whose hearts are open.

This really made me happy! Thankyou.

Laura
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Beanie Baby at 21:14 on 23 October 2005  Report this post
This speaks volumes. I really like the contrast between the old and the new, as well. I love autumn and this captures the mood brilliantly.
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smudger at 17:11 on 31 October 2005  Report this post
This really captures the happiness of gentle autumn weather. Seems to hint at other stirrings too...

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