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Bicycle

by LONGJON 

Posted: 26 July 2003
Word Count: 16
Summary: Haiku
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She is nine today
Her new bike is bright red and
She needs no help now






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Ioannou at 14:55 on 06 August 2003  Report this post
Liked this. Perfect balance of happy/sad. Or maybe that's just on the reading! But the colour and the specific age of nine made this tiny story work for me. Love, Maria.
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paul53 [for I am he] at 10:23 on 03 March 2005  Report this post
This came along in
Random Read, I found it good
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