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Timeghosts ...a poem

by bluesky3d 

Posted: 22 July 2003
Word Count: 208
Summary: a subterranean journey


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Timeghosts have haunted this space
as dreams
in the part that lies beneath
unseen

They move alongside in the deep
some surface briefly
to leave a wake
that disappears on waking

Each bead of sweat absorbed
each tear permeated into the pillow
adds one more drop of memory
to its repository

They manifest themselves collectively
within the ocean that surrounds
as weird and wonderful creatures
living within this unconscious sea

Near the surface they are familiar
some are even friendly
some glide like sharks scavenging at will
some even briefly bask upon rocks

But in the dark lie the bizarre
those that leave no mark and
make no sound
other than the clicking of strange electricity

Water snakes, manta rays and eels
creatures that defy all logic of form
they lie in shadows unseen
or under sand to grab or stun others passing near

Black holes
that manifest themselves
only by any absence of life
all sucked up

Yet some are beautiful
they glide effortlessly
within the debris of shipwrecks
within the coral reefs and seaweed

Fantastic imaginings
wondrous luminescent shapes that swim in shoals
they move as one
communicating by ESP

Those with iridescent colours
sheer artistry

Even sometimes mermaids tempt
and with their teasing tricks seduce






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Ellenna at 20:05 on 22 July 2003  Report this post
lovely A :)... just God on an "off day" slightly jarred.is there another way to describe those creatures that defy all logic of form?

But its like taking a wonderful subterranean journey ...:)

Ellie

bluesky3d at 08:10 on 07 September 2003  Report this post
'God on an off day' hmmm...the blue print lost? nop... am still sticking with God.. you any ideas?

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Water snakes, manta rays and eels
creatures that defy all logic and form
they lie in shadows unseen
or under sand to grab or stun others passing near

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is that better Ellie? :o)

Ellenna at 09:00 on 07 September 2003  Report this post
Feel guilty now you keep "god on an off day " if you want lol

Ellie :)

bluesky3d at 09:02 on 07 September 2003  Report this post
no Ellie I prefer...
'creatures that defy all logic and form'
it just took me 2 months to accept that was better
A :o)


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I'm gonna change it right now this minute... how's that for decision making?

Ellenna at 09:28 on 07 September 2003  Report this post
Wow! :)

bluesky3d at 09:32 on 07 September 2003  Report this post
not used 'panoply' even once!
A :o)


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