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Moral Man/Immoral Society after Reinhold Niebuhr (1932)

by seanfarragher 

Posted: 12 July 2005
Word Count: 445
Summary: "Flash Prompt and Exercise for July 10 -- By Caz Ferguson Zoetrope Sunday Afternoon Flash Exercise -- What a week. We need some happiness, so here it is. The prompt is very simple today, folks. Write a poem expressing joy. Write about anything that makes you happy, in any poetic form." --- My Poem, "Moral Man/Immoral Society", asks the general question: is "joy" possible in this imperfect world?
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Moral Man/Immoral Society
After Reinhold Niebuhr's Moral Man Immoral Society (1932)


In memoriam for the victims of terror in London last week. (Please note: The poem is not about how Londoners feel or how any victim of terror feels. I would not presume. My sympathy for the dead and harmed in London led me to the poem which explores the notion of moral man/immoral society as expressed in Niebuhr)


Moral Man/Immoral Society
By Sean Farragher

Most truth we know has an end and marks
thought to what resides in the human heart
minus the incontestable dream of life forever
without chemical rash or complicated skin;
all aches perish with survival on last
ocean wave –-every undulated crest
twisted. Truncated stem wraps right
to incorrect -- and worse harmony
deciphers wrong as zero, light as dark, --
while one is naught as confused map
and foil for the uncounted numbers
of terror's unpredictable deaths.


2.

There is no happiness
alive in stardom or infamy
just the bored storm
and the oft repeated scam
that man the optimist has proven
stronger than truth, whatever
the logic of the ruse that lie
runs between the schemes of oath
and saccharine promise to reveal
the edge of paradise to common eye
and drive all of Hades to shady spite
where the hoard of vermin congeal
in puddles of engineered slime
called by master for servant
to their less significant deaths.

3

Love rides away.
She keeps her steps
and laughs as I hold
her eyes to heaven
where steamed horizon
is now dark infernal
tributary of Tigris Hudson
Thames -- It lives
red inside yellow flower
crisp and black top gray cliff
while every ochre/brown branch
rides fingers inside
the contour of sex
while joy/bliss on horizon/
palisades still, quiet --
brave oaths released in air
above where genesis
renews its teeth shrouded mouth
to swallow him and her –
brave children born
our day rows simple canoe
by tender hand between
left and right,
storm and calm,
age and youth,
for inside praise
holy sacrament dwells
while love’s candor
writhes without excuse.

If most of this were true,
then terror heard would be
stricken from vocabulary
and new words would be soft rain
drawn down upon eyes so every
lid was open to moral rage
and pathetic rant. Is it not?

There's no place to hide.
Crafted music drives
the furies to the hills
and keeps the beaches
soft with salt and sand.
Every dune will change
tomorrow and today.

Perhaps, nothing exists,
but NOW -- that far away
grace of frail alluvium --
There, under foot, crushed
residue and shell commits
time to its lead pocket.




XXX






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Cornelia at 13:39 on 12 July 2005  Report this post
Although well-meant, and although there is much I can't understand in this - not much I can, really- I think this is very far from how Londoners feel about recent events, or would want to feel. It is sad to see the faces of the missing pinned to lamposts, inconvenient to have to skirt round taped-off streets, but people here remember how many times this has happened before, on larger or smaller scale, and just hope the next one doesn't have their name on it.

Sheila

seanfarragher at 14:22 on 12 July 2005  Report this post
It is not about how Londoner's feel. I wouldn't presume, but how I feel about evil and good, and the hobbesian notion that there is evil too much in the world and man or is it mankinde is not good.
Isn't it possible to express the notion of sadness for the events in London and of course the events on 9/11 in USA. I was in Belfas in 1972 and I saw the horrors there as well. I saw how mindless Catholics and Mindless Presbyterians fought about religion. How sad the culture wars. How sad the ends.

We are entrapped in a terrible cycle of evil. The more we fight, the greater the wrong. BUT if we do not fight (and fight with all means) then the ends for western culture is assured. What a condundrum. It greives me what happened in London. What happened in Spain. What happens every day in Iraq and Afganistan. It greives me what happens in Africa. We as a population and race of capitalist have made the world into a sewer for the pursuit of profit, oil and the exploitation of people. How can that not be true?

Cornelia at 15:21 on 12 July 2005  Report this post
Yes, I can see what you mean about how you feel, but thought it was inappropriate to associate the recent bereavements and anguish felt by victims in London with an apocalyptic vision or wish for revenge. That is why the disclaimer you have added is necessary, in my opinion.It is, of course, inevitable that individuals will associate these events with their own concerns and beliefs and you have given voice to yours.


Sheila




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