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homeward bound

by Williamwords 

Posted: 10 July 2005
Word Count: 49
Summary: written during a long night flight home
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Sitting here how strange it seems,
A bullets speed, a lifetime's dreams.
The earth's strange carpet far below
what I cannot see I cannot know.
Suspended here between sea and sky
safe from all the questions why;
This gentle time before the day
arrives and dreams will melt away.






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Ticonderoga at 14:36 on 11 July 2005  Report this post
A lovely moment of suspended animation and involuntary objectivity. Nicely put.


Mike
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joanie at 17:15 on 11 July 2005  Report this post
I find it very strange to be 'hanging in the sky'. The feeling here is very well conveyed. I particularly like 'Suspended here between sea and sky
safe from all the questions why', partly because of all the 's' sounds but also because you have captured it perfectly.

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