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Morning

by LONGJON 

Posted: 18 July 2003
Word Count: 12
Summary: Haiku.
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Waking this morning
To sunshine stroking my face,
As gently as love.






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poemsgalore at 12:49 on 19 July 2003  Report this post
Only one word to say about this - perfect.
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LONGJON at 22:44 on 19 July 2003  Report this post
Hello Kathleen,

Many thanks for your comment, very generous. I've written a small series of haiku, and I'll put them up one by one rather than as a group. I think these need to be done singly, don't you?

Take care,

John P.
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poemsgalore at 12:39 on 20 July 2003  Report this post
It will certainly make it easier for us to concentrate on each one individually and give undivided attention to each piece of work. Although if they're all as good as this, I'll just keep saying the same thing - perfect. :-)
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