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The Wedding

by Beanie Baby 

Posted: 29 June 2005
Word Count: 29
Summary: This is one of those poems that comes complete and this one came when I walked past a wedding party coming out of the local registry office a couple of weekends ago.
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"We've got an hour,"
said the bride with pride,
dress flowing in
the breeze.

"Here's the photographer,"
said the groom making room
as the family posed
by the trees.






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Nik Perring at 13:01 on 29 June 2005  Report this post
Liked this Beanie. This realy benefits from its simplicity.

Nik.
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laurafraser at 20:47 on 29 June 2005  Report this post
Like a wedding snap shot, like something the groom or the bride would write onan anniversary looking back with a smile on their face, recalling a day that was bliss.
Simplicity here is the strength.

Laura
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jewelsx at 22:02 on 30 June 2005  Report this post
This creates a beautiful image. The poem works really well.

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joanie at 09:48 on 01 July 2005  Report this post
Beanie, I thought I had commented on this already. It's a lovely snapshot, worthy of a place with all the other wedding photos! I like the brevity and I love the rhymes.

joanie
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Ticonderoga at 13:33 on 02 July 2005  Report this post
I walked past the exact same thing yesterday!! Well put.


Mike
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Barlow at 17:29 on 08 July 2005  Report this post
Very neatly expressed Beanie.
Keep the poetry coming.
Best wishes,
Barlow
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lieslj at 20:19 on 04 August 2005  Report this post
Charming, Beanie. The rhyme is perfect - balanced, apt and delightful. I love this beautiful miniature you've created.

Liesl
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