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Junk Food

by Dark One

Posted: 17 July 2003
Word Count: 65

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Burger,
Fries,
Milkshake to go
Load me up
With God only knows

Big Mac,
Whopper,
Lay it on thick,
Bring me a bucket
I’m gonna be sick

Wimpy,
McDonalds,
KFC,
They are all the same
Ways for killing me

Bacon,
Sausage,
Baked beans
Slap up meal
Bursting to the seams

Junk food,
Pick n Mix
Greasy Spoon,
Eat what you like
Your gonna die soon

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Shadowgirl at 22:19 on 17 July 2003 Report this post

Brilliant!!!

I read both your poems tonight, both so easy and simple (please take that as a compliment) on the surface, but with SO much more underneath.

It reminded me of two women I heard chatting in the doctor's surgery recently. They were talking of the sudden death of a mutual friend who had been fit, healthy, not overweight etc...and one suddenly said "I blame McDonalds!" and while I hid my laughter the other nodded, knowingly with a serious face.

Please post more - I look forward to reading them.

Best wishes
Shads

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