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Junk Food

by Dark One 

Posted: 17 July 2003
Word Count: 65

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Milkshake to go
Load me up
With God only knows

Big Mac,
Lay it on thick,
Bring me a bucket
Iím gonna be sick

They are all the same
Ways for killing me

Baked beans
Slap up meal
Bursting to the seams

Junk food,
Pick n Mix
Greasy Spoon,
Eat what you like
Your gonna die soon

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Shadowgirl at 22:19 on 17 July 2003  Report this post

I read both your poems tonight, both so easy and simple (please take that as a compliment) on the surface, but with SO much more underneath.

It reminded me of two women I heard chatting in the doctor's surgery recently. They were talking of the sudden death of a mutual friend who had been fit, healthy, not overweight etc...and one suddenly said "I blame McDonalds!" and while I hid my laughter the other nodded, knowingly with a serious face.

Please post more - I look forward to reading them.

Best wishes

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