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On coming home from work

by joanie 

Posted: 14 June 2005
Word Count: 6
Summary: I have started the ball rolling! Any takers?
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A glass of wine
is fine.






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Roz at 21:57 on 14 June 2005  Report this post
After work today
I heard Joanie say:

"A glass of wine
is fine."

Not for this dolt.
I'd rather make mine
a wee dram o' malt.
It'd go down twice
as nice as wine.

~roz
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The Walrus at 20:27 on 15 June 2005  Report this post
Aboslutely first class, however I would suggest 'fine' is a massive understatement.

Very much enjoyed this, particularly after a challenging day.

Cheers!

Christina
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hailfabio at 13:48 on 16 June 2005  Report this post
But only one,
not nine!

:)
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