Magnetic Poetry - Love me
by joanie
Posted: Tuesday, January 11, 2005 Word Count: 92 Summary: A second attempt at magnetic poetry, which we are looking at in Poetry Seminar, using a different set of words. My first attempt is added at the end. |
Bring me ocean-blue electric passion,
linger in my velvet-soft embrace.
Fashion me a masterpiece in porcelain,
pierce this concrete sculpture with a kiss.
Paint these lips a warm translucent circle,
capture canvas fever from my smile.
Sculpt a magic picture, write my colour;
demand the universe become surreal.
first attempt
Ballerina
Her unmalleable feminism,
technique dashed and rolled back
to accept that which
dubbed her personality
blazing.
Famously arriving in
ballet costume which described her
as classical.
Incredible smoker in jeans -
amazing.
Dancing red muscle snakes famously,
a recipe for discipline.
linger in my velvet-soft embrace.
Fashion me a masterpiece in porcelain,
pierce this concrete sculpture with a kiss.
Paint these lips a warm translucent circle,
capture canvas fever from my smile.
Sculpt a magic picture, write my colour;
demand the universe become surreal.
first attempt
Ballerina
Her unmalleable feminism,
technique dashed and rolled back
to accept that which
dubbed her personality
blazing.
Famously arriving in
ballet costume which described her
as classical.
Incredible smoker in jeans -
amazing.
Dancing red muscle snakes famously,
a recipe for discipline.