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Spin Din End.

by  Lawrenco

Posted: Thursday, December 9, 2004
Word Count: 126
Summary: A little late in posting the Blue Fan exercise.I am not sure how it comes over so would invite crititism,your thoughts.




Outside they bicker ,inside loudly fan blades flicker.
Ever new constant breze,keeps me cool.
I stare over it;and I wonder at the endless,endless,blue.

Pack my bags a holiday date due.
And I wonder at the endless endless blue.
Bladed spin caught up in a corrupt,wind whirling din.

Spined air,can resonate ,the commotion outside overpowers.
There`s a push at the door,to my final hour?
And I wonder at the endless,endless,blue.

A gun in my hand ,dead body on the deck.
I throw the fan,and I wonder at the endless endless blue
Grease ball vigilantes eye balling after my neck.

And I wonder at the endless,endless blue.
Appeal looks good ,give justice a place to view.
remiss of a fan ,in a cell for something I didn`t do.