Old Apple Tree
by joanie
Posted: Monday, October 11, 2004 Word Count: 245 Summary: This is written as a response to Mark Doty's 'White Kimono', which we studied in Poetry Seminar. Apple tree again! |
Silver-grey and yellow lichen,
delicate minute fronds
on gnarled, arthritic boughs
which bear fruit. Unnamed diseases
have blighted it and stunted
its growth for years;
a stooped old man
whose fruits are diminutive
brown-spotted apologies.
Grandad used to say they weren't
worth bothering with. He knew.
He wanted to rip it out
once and for all. Jane
(with the haughty superiority
of a thirteen-year-old)
would not eat them.
Supermarket shelves spawned fruit
in her eyes; anything else
was disgusting and hardly worthy
of recognition. I cut across
the plumpness, through the blemishes;
two five-pointed stars
shine at me. I smile back.
The leprous peel hides pure
white fruit. We wonder if we should,
then take a knife and cut.
I taste the bitter sweetness
and salivate involuntarily. Remember
Grandad's face when he ate
something sharp? We laugh
(and cry, inside, for him). Andrew,
fruit-lover extraordinaire, chomps
happily and goes for more,
revelling in the bitterness.
We shall spend hours in the kitchen,
peeling, chopping, boiling, sweetening,
so we can proclaim, "They're from the tree!"
then maybe brave scatches - attacks
from brambles - so we can gather
wild blackberries and set up
the once white, now crimson-stained
square of muslin, pinned
overnight to the legs
of an unpturned stool.
My tongue tests its taste again;
more thirst-quenching than
a litre of ice-cold mineral water,
mountain fresh. As the juices
begin to flow, so the memories
which blatantly defy time
flood in too. My lovely Dad.
delicate minute fronds
on gnarled, arthritic boughs
which bear fruit. Unnamed diseases
have blighted it and stunted
its growth for years;
a stooped old man
whose fruits are diminutive
brown-spotted apologies.
Grandad used to say they weren't
worth bothering with. He knew.
He wanted to rip it out
once and for all. Jane
(with the haughty superiority
of a thirteen-year-old)
would not eat them.
Supermarket shelves spawned fruit
in her eyes; anything else
was disgusting and hardly worthy
of recognition. I cut across
the plumpness, through the blemishes;
two five-pointed stars
shine at me. I smile back.
The leprous peel hides pure
white fruit. We wonder if we should,
then take a knife and cut.
I taste the bitter sweetness
and salivate involuntarily. Remember
Grandad's face when he ate
something sharp? We laugh
(and cry, inside, for him). Andrew,
fruit-lover extraordinaire, chomps
happily and goes for more,
revelling in the bitterness.
We shall spend hours in the kitchen,
peeling, chopping, boiling, sweetening,
so we can proclaim, "They're from the tree!"
then maybe brave scatches - attacks
from brambles - so we can gather
wild blackberries and set up
the once white, now crimson-stained
square of muslin, pinned
overnight to the legs
of an unpturned stool.
My tongue tests its taste again;
more thirst-quenching than
a litre of ice-cold mineral water,
mountain fresh. As the juices
begin to flow, so the memories
which blatantly defy time
flood in too. My lovely Dad.