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Sibling

by  Nell

Posted: Friday, April 23, 2004
Word Count: 84
Summary: Poem inspired by Anna Akhmatova's Willow. I didn't achieve exactly what I strove for - the poem seemed to take over and refused to conform. Any suggestions for improvement welcome.




I was a child in a storybook
With words and pictures running through my head.
My every action accompanied by a half-murmured commentary
That continued throughout those early years
Of light and warmth and love.
Sometimes the child in my story
Made someone to share those adventures.
A longed-for ideal.
And one day he came into being.
But with his birth everything
Changed, and the words and pictures became
Not mine. The sun disappeared
Behind the clouds and I
Closed the book...The story died.