Tiny Little World
by Jojovits1
Posted: Monday, May 11, 2020 Word Count: 115 Summary: Lockdown with me working from home in a one bed flat and hubby having to breathe the same air - with no escape. Help please. I feel it's either too long or too condensed, missing the point and need to fix! |
Version one - the one for Flash with no amendments
Your world
disrupted,
making room
for mine
in our tiny space.
Work, home.
My routine
unchanged
though work
and home
are now the same.
The difference
is deafening.
There is no telling
when routine
will return
for you.
Yet you take
my hand
on our daily walks.
Fresh air
and laughter
our vaccine
Life goes on
and in our
tiny, little space
our world
is a universe.
Version two
Your life
disrupted,
making room
for mine
on this
small island.
Yet, on
daily walks
fresh air
and laughter
is our
vaccine.
Life goes on.
In our tiny,
little space
our world
is a universe.
Your world
disrupted,
making room
for mine
in our tiny space.
Work, home.
My routine
unchanged
though work
and home
are now the same.
The difference
is deafening.
There is no telling
when routine
will return
for you.
Yet you take
my hand
on our daily walks.
Fresh air
and laughter
our vaccine
Life goes on
and in our
tiny, little space
our world
is a universe.
Version two
Your life
disrupted,
making room
for mine
on this
small island.
Yet, on
daily walks
fresh air
and laughter
is our
vaccine.
Life goes on.
In our tiny,
little space
our world
is a universe.