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Soldier

by  Sallyj

Posted: Wednesday, August 3, 2011
Word Count: 132
Summary: A pantoum which was inspired when I first saw my son in uniform amongst other soldiers ...




I don’t know the man who stands
camouflaged, in green battledress,
feet apart, straight back, still hands,
unwitting, not dressed to impress.

Camouflaged in green battledress,
hard-cropped head turned away,
unwitting, not dressed to impress,
despite glossed boots, badged beret.

Hard-cropped head turned away
exposing bare vulnerable neck,
despite glossed boots, badged beret,
braced shoulders – a flawed effect.

Exposing bare, vulnerable neck,
pulse rippling beneath soft skin,
braced shoulders, a flawed effect,
veiled gaze, attention within.

Pulse rippling beneath soft skin,
my son’s rifled brow, drilled with lines,
veiled gaze, attention within -
then blue eyes lift, smile into mine.

My son’s rifled brow, drilled with lines,
feet apart, straight back, still hands,
then blue eyes lift, smile into mine
and I see my boy in the eyes of the man.