The lament of a lost queen
by freynolds
Posted: Tuesday, April 28, 2009 Word Count: 76 Summary: This is a very rough short poem I wrote this morning. I thought I'd post something as we are quite quiet at the moment... critiques, please. |
I am she,
Pharaoh queen and lover
Forever entwined to my Nile.
Above the remnants of my empire
I see that my present,
my needles, have gone
where once stood proud
others have crumbled.
I err upon a lost kingdom
tears of blood
falling on my beloved land.
What did they do to my story?
I travelled in my own tapestry
dining on pearls
and sweet wines
I kissed a snake, they say,
One too many
Pharaoh queen and lover
Forever entwined to my Nile.
Above the remnants of my empire
I see that my present,
my needles, have gone
where once stood proud
others have crumbled.
I err upon a lost kingdom
tears of blood
falling on my beloved land.
What did they do to my story?
I travelled in my own tapestry
dining on pearls
and sweet wines
I kissed a snake, they say,
One too many