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Moon Rabbit version 2

by  Steerpike`s sister

Posted: Friday, August 22, 2008
Word Count: 210
Summary: Have tried to develop the ending so it is less abrupt.




MOON RABBIT

Moon Rabbit goes racing, racing, racing.
Moon Rabbit goes chasing, chasing, chasing.

Over the stars – hop! Across the clouds – skip!
All the way down, to a little round ball called Earth.

Moon Rabbit goes racing, racing, racing.
Moon Rabbit goes chasing, chasing, chasing.

Over the trees – hop! Across the seas – skip!
All the way to a little town called Your Town.

Moon Rabbit goes racing, racing, racing.
Moon Rabbit goes chasing, chasing, chasing.

Over the lamp-posts – hop! Across the roof-tops – skip!
All the way to a sleepy street called Your Street.

Moon Rabbit is looking, looking, looking.
His bright eyes shine in the windows.
He's looking for his best friend, but his best friend isn’t there.

Where are You?

Driving, driving, driving.
Driving with Daddy in a big fast car.

Here comes Moon Rabbit, chasing, chasing.
Here comes Moon Rabbit, racing, racing.
Keeping pace beside the car.

Wave to Moon Rabbit! Here we are!

Moon Rabbit, Moon Rabbit, we've been far.
Driving, driving, in the car.
Now we're tired and coming home.
Are you sleepy? Nearly there…

You and Moon Rabbit, found each other.
Snuggle up beneath the covers.
Moon Rabbit's eyes shine bright, shine strong.
Keep you safe, all night long.