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Embrace

by  radavies1uk

Posted: Saturday, April 15, 2006
Word Count: 37
Summary: I've tried to completely drop the rhyme and cut as much as possible while still getting the point across. Works??




Lost as I quivered, surprising touch.
As you first clasped my hand,
jumped my heart, opened to our embrace.

Lost as I teetered over luscious lips,
remembered breasts, hands and legs.
Pearly white beads, goose-pimpled red cheeks.