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Grey

by  joanie

Posted: Thursday, March 30, 2006
Word Count: 77




Version 2

Difficult
to say where drizzle stops
and mist begins. Greyness
veils a landscape
dripping with dampening Springtime.

Impossible
to know when friendship starts
and love takes off. A lifetime
shrouds emotions
trickling under the surface.

Version 1
Difficult
to say where drizzle stops
and mist begins. Greyness
veils a landscape
dripping with dampening Springtime.

Impossible
to know when friendship starts
and love takes off. A lifetime
shrouds the feelings
nestling under the surface of reality.