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Sally

by  Swoo

Posted: Wednesday, March 29, 2006
Word Count: 103
Summary: Really nasty 1st draft of a piece to introduce myself with! I don't normally use rhythm like this. Not sure if it works. Also struggling with line breaks.




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This piece and/or subsequent comments may contain strong language.


Sally



hit her children.
Took a bottle to the youngest
which would teach her to be like
that man, to shut her fucking trap.

Sally woke at noon.
Left the gas on in the kitchen
left the girls in wet pyjamas.
Went down the social. Packed.

The eldest up to Liverpool.
The youngest stayed in London.
Up north, Sally visited, three Sundays, maybe, max.
I’ve got new kids now, she giggled, Easier than you two.
I’m in love, engaged, three-bedrooms,
it’s fantastic. Near the shops.

No visits down in London.
The youngest growing thin
got clever with a razor.
Opened up her skin.