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As time went by

by  joanie

Posted: Tuesday, February 21, 2006
Word Count: 58




Prompted by eanna's comment:

Version 2 (Thanks, eanna!)
from a million memories
in a room full of dreams
while time flew unnoticed
life passed us by

original version
A moment
plucked
from a million memories

Experience
shared
in a room full of dreams

Feelings
stolen
while time flew unnoticed

We fell
in love

but life passed us by