Hard - a ghazal
by joanie
Posted: Thursday, February 9, 2006 Word Count: 85 Summary: At last! Am I allowed to have the plural 'scales' as part of my rhyming 'thing' in the line with the radif? Nightmare = Poetry Seminar exercise! |
His back a soft expanse laid bare, invited nails;
She left a curlicue, a trail behind her nails.
Her gentle touch a tantalising promise held
for ever. Hands so frail have much more need of nails.
He lay, quite unsuspecting, wallowing in lust;
his imperfections Braille he yielded to her nails.
Beneath her velvet touches lurked a subtle snake
with undulating scales which writhed with lethal nails.
Too late, his natural defences failed to work.
His coffin lid a jail made permanent - her nails
She left a curlicue, a trail behind her nails.
Her gentle touch a tantalising promise held
for ever. Hands so frail have much more need of nails.
He lay, quite unsuspecting, wallowing in lust;
his imperfections Braille he yielded to her nails.
Beneath her velvet touches lurked a subtle snake
with undulating scales which writhed with lethal nails.
Too late, his natural defences failed to work.
His coffin lid a jail made permanent - her nails