With Colour (draft)
by Xenny
Posted: Wednesday, February 8, 2006 Word Count: 93 Summary: My second attempt at a Ghazal. New draft, with much help from all you lot! |
I wanted to tell you your story in colour
I wanted to splatter your body with colour
We came down from the hills when our feeling was good
Those weeks were an island of colour
They got it all wrong but I know I'm not wrong
His hands and his mouth, three slashes of colour
You were painfully gentle, too soft to make sense
You sparked off a rainbow, a minefield of colour
You sat ten feet away and wrote me a letter
It's strange how your name, how you, have changed colour
I wanted to splatter your body with colour
We came down from the hills when our feeling was good
Those weeks were an island of colour
They got it all wrong but I know I'm not wrong
His hands and his mouth, three slashes of colour
You were painfully gentle, too soft to make sense
You sparked off a rainbow, a minefield of colour
You sat ten feet away and wrote me a letter
It's strange how your name, how you, have changed colour