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freedom?

by  ccatherine

Posted: Monday, October 24, 2005
Word Count: 32
Summary: This is work in progress and needs polishing. As it is something I've not tried before I just wanted to know what people think there is still a lot more to say.




feel the breeze
the sunlight’s brightness hurts
illuminates
in darkness
in invisibility
devoid of restraint
would you spiral downwards?
would you sin?
fear constrains
enforces integrity
imprisons natures chains
illusion's
our comfort