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Past TImes

by  joanie

Posted: Friday, October 7, 2005
Word Count: 82




Final version


in the misted middle-distance
of memories
lurk spectres
skilled in anamnesis,
ready to talk

Various workings along the way.....

I
in the misted middle-distance
of memories,
mantled in hazy apparel,
lurk spectres
skilled in anamnesis,
ready to talk
at the optimum time


II
in the misted middle-distance
of memories,
mantled in hazy apparel,
lurk spectres
waiting to talk.


III (probably final version)
in the misted middle-distance
of memories,
mantled in hazy apparel,
lurk spectres
skilled in anamnesis,
ready to talk