Trying to quit (a terzanelle)
by joanie
Posted: Saturday, September 10, 2005 Word Count: 130 Summary: I'm not sure how this came about - I have never been a smoker! Anyway, a terzanelle, finally. I have deliberately changed the repeated lines slightly. |
It’s been a funny sort of day
when once or twice I thought I’d lost
the plot. My plans have gone astray.
I’m touching wood with fingers crossed
to play this game of life and death
which once or twice I thought I’d lost.
I felt I’d breathed my final breath
this morning as I fought so hard
to win this game of life or death.
Impatience left her calling card
but Strength stepped in and took control
this morning, when I fought so hard.
Tomorrow I may meet my goal;
I almost seized it by the throat
when Strength stepped in and took control.
I’m drifting, feeling quite remote;
it’s been a funny sort of day;
I got mistaken when I wrote
the plot. My plans have gone astray.
when once or twice I thought I’d lost
the plot. My plans have gone astray.
I’m touching wood with fingers crossed
to play this game of life and death
which once or twice I thought I’d lost.
I felt I’d breathed my final breath
this morning as I fought so hard
to win this game of life or death.
Impatience left her calling card
but Strength stepped in and took control
this morning, when I fought so hard.
Tomorrow I may meet my goal;
I almost seized it by the throat
when Strength stepped in and took control.
I’m drifting, feeling quite remote;
it’s been a funny sort of day;
I got mistaken when I wrote
the plot. My plans have gone astray.