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Death Ramblings

by Rai15 

Posted: 31 December 2003
Word Count: 56

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I am drowning
In a sea of drought
My contradictions
Though right, are wrong
Though wrong, youíre right
You love my name
My name a truth
Hush now sweet dreams
Sleep tight my insomniac
My symptom number three
And a catís last life
Drove the mouse to sanity
I am not insane
You just donít understand

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roovacrag at 10:32 on 01 January 2004  Report this post
Great one rai,I am always amazed on your play with words.Wish my paintings was as good. xxxxxxxx Alice

Fearless at 14:51 on 01 January 2004  Report this post

Good use of language at play. Show us what else you can do.......ever written about aromas?


Rai15 at 18:44 on 01 January 2004  Report this post
Thank you both. As of yet I haven't attempted writing about aromas, I shall consider it now though.

Happy New Year


Bobo at 21:25 on 01 January 2004  Report this post
Rai - great, as always. Keep it up!

BoBo x

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