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The secret of eveywoman

by  Doulani  ( 232 )

Posted: 29 July 2008
Word Count: 1003


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She moves infront him to show how much she cares for him . Yes the world is there to watch but I am here to be seen. I am here. Here ! The one who cares for your feelings. The one who hides her suffering for you. She lost those chains that kept her from showing her feelings. Do you think as a man that that smile is for everyone,that walk and talk were meant to other than you? Why do you think that she would be for other than you. How hard to be the second part for a man when his first half is lost.How hard she tries to reach your frozen heart? That ice moutain .When will it melt to let her have her feet on a solid ground .You took the light of her face because she is all the night restless trying to make sure , You and only you is relaxed.

Still, What does she get ?a word of love just in bed to drug her. A look back when you walk?? Sure that look was meant to make sure that no one follows her. Yes , you take the photo album. To remember her face. I doubt that. The heat of that file is fading . Like a candle she burnt and evey year her tears fall deeper and harder. Have you turned to see her face in the middle of the night? Did you hear her calls for you ? She keeps all that for you and she will always do, But really how hard to love a man who never found his first half. How could she be the second ?How could she?

She just wanted a heart to beat for her. A smile that takes away her fear. A touch that could take her to the unknown and still without being afraid. she wishes your door to be open without a knock. Your tears to fall without her crying. Yes she dreams of you crying for her pain . When she says I need you , she means she needs a hug , Hold her tight to your heart, She doesnot want more than that . How many times she wished to whisper in her ears and say I LOVE YOU. When was the last time you smelled her and told her that she smells like roses ,that her eyes are so wonderful that you dont wish to turn your eyes from her eyes mirror. Have you told her that her smile is like a song coming from heaven? Have you been afraid that the wind that touches her skin would hurt her ? When was the time you took your coat to cover her from the rain and went wet, Are you just a man in words ? Do you carry her to the door case?

How hard to feel that you lost the battle even before going to war. You lost Sir. Yes ,you did. You lost the moment she did not find you when she cried. You lost when you said her lightining the candles was silly, You lost Sir when you thought that all the gold of the world could bring her heart to you. You lost sir when you thought that going on your knees will make you lose your pride. You lost also my gentleman when you thought that even if she said I hate you she meant I love you ,Fool .Punishment is to stay way , Like a deer which is afraid from even the hands that feed him . Look how is the bird fly when you move more than what they wish you to move, She is afraid from you, You did not know your first half and you lost the other who tried to let you feel it . How hard life could be when you dont know what is the Secret Of Every Woman

She no more can wait you, She sailed alone in the seas of nice memories .She left you on your safe shores and set alone in a long journey for the unknown. She faces waves of years alone , Without you Sir. Without you. She burnt all your ships before she left. She no more wishes you to follow her. When did you run after her on the land to sail after her in the oceans and seas. When she became strong to tell you I am dont need you ,you felt how much she had a value. Now you look from your shore over the horizon to see what is left from her ship. Nothing is left the far for you to see. Not even the memory. She burnt even the last book on the shore to set a fire to make you warm before she left. She moves way from you. so far from your dull life . Maybe she will find a new world and even if she did not at least she tried to find her other half and still you did not find the first. Who won ? Just tell me ?Who ? You or her ?

It is time for you now to open her note books .See what she wrote in those days when you were not with her.
First Day : I saw him and i wanted to tell him he is cute.
Second day : i went home and cried because i did not see him today
Third day : I saw him today and i felt so much happy.
Forth
fifth
day . fifth , sixth
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God . God . God.
All this about me. me.
She wont come back. sure she wont. live with the memories . just live with them . You lost the second part and now you know the first , The first is that you are no more a human and the second is that you no more a lover, Live to tell other men THe SECRET OF EVERY WOMAN




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