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Pilgrims, A word of thank for James Graham

by  Doulani  ( 240 )

Posted: 02 June 2008
Word Count: 122
Summary: Mr.James Graham helped me for quite a time in my poetry work.I really wish to thank him for his help .His strong words of criticism were a shining light of guidance , thank you Mr. James


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I hereby bow the humble head.
For what I've seen and read.
A sense of care I really miss.
It fills the heart with happiness.
A warmth of the past as Pilgrims meet.
Shared with that longing heart beat.
For the smell of the Jericho nectar smells
And the sound of Praying with churches bells
From the Holy land I am ,my Sire.
If we were not the swords once,we were the fire.
Swords of pilgrims that cut the night.
Fire of truth to lead Moses' to Lord's right.
Codes as they say are read between a line.
Who am I but a servant of a Shrine.
One who was taught wisdom by unknown.
Time has come ,it seems, to be shown.




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Posted by :  James Graham at 20:40 on 14 June 2008
Thank you for this, Ahmad. I' m very touched and most grateful.

James.


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